User talk:Robbchadwick
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Mel Etitis (Μελ Ετητης) 22:13, 24 Mar 2005 (UTC)
Your edits to Leo Frank article
[edit]Hi, welcome. Thanks for your work on the Leo Frank article. With your permission, I have a couple of remarks. Some of your edits inject an "editorial" voice which isn't really appropriate in an encyclopedia article, where we strive for editorial neutrality. For example, you wrote (emphasis mine):
- "Unfortunately, Alonzo Mann's assertion..."
- "However, it is very important to understand... that
- "In fact, one can..."
- "the most one can say is..."
These expressions imply value judgements on the part of the writer. We normally try to avoid this (see: Wikipedia:Neutral point of view). But that's ok; sometimes it takes a little bit of practice to get the hang of this style of writing.
Also, the paragraph in the notes probably belong in the trial section, but I am not completely sure; I will study that matter further.
In the meantime, I am going to tweak your additions a little bit. If you have any comments or questions about what I do, feel free to leave a message on the discussion page of that article, and we can talk about it further. All the best, -- Viajero 11:31, 25 Mar 2005 (UTC)