Wikipedia:Peer review/Dawson's Creek/archive1
Probably the longest article I've done in Wikipedia. Only a couple others have offered edits and I'm curious to see what everyone else thinks. PedanticallySpeaking 18:50, Oct 7, 2004 (UTC)
- Wow! Amazing synopsis of the show... I never realised things were that complicated in the series (I never really watched it though). You need to expand the intro, and fix the "only one worthwhile book" POV, get some images - do this and I reckon I'll vote this up on WP:FAC. - Ta bu shi da yu 02:12, 16 Oct 2004 (UTC)
- Some comments:
- No lead section
- The controversy section needs a lot of work - it should probably be at the end, and needs a vast amount of NPOVing
- The synopsis isn't bad, but it does have quite a few NPOV problems.
- A few grammar problems, and the tone can be overly casual at times.
- The credits section is very long, and I think some of it could be turned into prose.
- The theme song should probably be mentioned in the lead, rather than at the very bottom, the broadcast history should probably be further up, and that could also do with a copyedit. Ambi 03:03, 16 Oct 2004 (UTC)